Heavenly-Tears

Heavenly-Tears' Healthy Fandom (Slight)Ranting and Exercises ------------------------ Dear NaruSaku fans and other fandoms, Hello! First of all, we are ALL Naruto fans, but there are a few, well, FLAWS that I would like to point out to you today. Now, I'm not trying to bash or hate on your pairing but most of this is just opinion, 'k? If I start cussing just ignore it, I'm probably just trying to get a point across. Also, I get really mad at NaruSaku fans for many reasons, which I will also explain to you. -In Chapter 469 (I think) we witnessed Sakura confessing to Naruto, saying she loved him now and NOT Sasuke. Now people, after Sakura

------------------ "I'm HO-OME~!" Kushina yelled and she opened the front door to her apartment. Or, at least she thought it was her apartment until she saw that it was spotless and smelled like someone had a blast cleaning for the past three weeks. "Wrong house, again, Kushina," a voice called out from the living room. "Check the number." Kushina opened the door and looked at the room numbers on it. They were 207. She lived in Room 208, the room next door. "Sorry Minato," she yelled. She sniffed the air. "Why does your house smell like Pine-Sol?" Minato walked out of the living room to show that he had a cleaning apron and tool belt on

----------------------- Chapter Four: Late October ----------------------- The first night it rained, it hadn't stopped not once. It was still raining now. The rain varied: it was sometimes falling in sheets like mist, or raining like needles so when it hit you it stung. Sometimes it flooded the village with big rain drops that soaked front yards and halted the market and the people that wanted to buy from the vendors. Everything slowed down. It was calm. Akane couldn't remember when it rained so hard and relentlessly. She couldn't go outside to jump in the huge water puddles in her front yard--well, it's not like she could even if she wa

--------------------------- Chapter Three: Early October -------------------------- Akane slowly turned the knob on the door going outside, as not to wake her family. She sighed as she stared at the morning sky; the sun was barely peeking over at the horizon, dying the clouds pink and orange. She breathed in the misty air. It would rain later. She walked over to the side of the front porch and grabbed her bike, shifting it down the porch steps and onto the dirt path that led away from her house. She got on her bike and kicked up the kickstand, before shoving her weight against the ground with her foot and pedaling off. She gritted her tee

--------------- Prolouge: This Madness --------------- Sixteen years ago... -------------- "Asami, do you want to see your baby brother?" her father asked. Asami could feel the excitement in her veins and she bit down on her fist so she wouldn't start giggling. Her father chuckled, taking that as a 'yes' and lead her into the hospital room. Her mother was laying in the hospital bed, her red hair splayed across the pillows and sticking to her forehead by her sweat. In her mother's arms, Asami could see,  was a small bundle. Her mother was smiling at it. Suddenly, her mother looked up and smiled wider. "Come see you brother, Asa-chan," h

"I wish I was there to celebrate his birthday with him this year...", a red-haired woman sighed sadly. She had her head propped up in one of her hands, staring at a television that had a teenage blond haired boy in it. He was lying down on his bed, sleeping. "Kushina, we weren’t there for his birthday last year. Or the year before that. Or the year before that--" "Which is exactly my point!" 'Ugh...’ her husband sighed in his head. 'Another one of her lectures...' "Listen, Minato, we've been dead for sixteen years! That's sixteen years of alone time for Naruto! No birthday gifts at all! Got it? Nothing!” Kushina ranted. "Ev

----------------------------------- "Kaa-san?" Hinata opened her eyes slowly to see her children in front of her. Yuudai and Yuuki's blond hair and blue eyes and Akane with her deep red hair and her pale eyes stared at her. Hinata smiled at them and reached out to stroke Akane's cheek. "Hello, dears.", she said quietly. Akane smiled and lunged at her, hugging her tightly. Yuudai and Yuuki smiled and moved to the other side of the bed and joined. "Kaa-san, we were so worried about you!", Akane exclaimed. "We were.", said a voice. Hinata's eyes moved to the doorway to look at the man she fell in love with. She smiled. He walked over to th

His Gift ----------------- "What's this for?", Uzumaki Kushina asked. In her hands was a ceramic pot filled with dirt. Just dirt. "Oh, well, I just wanted to get you something special for your birthday.", her friend, Namikaze Minato replied. "You got me a jar of dirt for my birthday...", Kushina pondered.  "Thanks...I guess." Minato laughed. "Kushina, it's not just a jar of dirt. It has a flower seed in it. If you water it everyday, it'll grow--" "Into what?" "--into a Gardenia." Minato put his hands over hers that were holding the pot. "Did you know, Kushina? Every flower has tons of different meanings." "When this Gardenia has it's

Hinata grabbed his hand and pulled. Yet his feet were planted to the ground, like they had been molded into the dirt with cement. She pulled. He leaned forward. She let go. He leaned back. She sighed. "Naruto-kun, you've been saying for the last five months that you want to get the hell out of that hospital.", she spoke confidently. She put her hands on her hips and looked at her dear love. His blond hair was messy, his eyes pale, but held a hint of shredded curiousity. He stared forward. "Naruto-kun, they're waiting. They're finally going to see you. But,", she stopped, walked up to him and placed a gentle kiss on lips and hugged him tight,

Part 2 SICKNESS ----------------------- I stared at the map in hands closely, tracing parts of it with my index finger. I peered closer and closer and closer... "AHA!", I exclaimed. My son, Naruto, leaned up to me and stared at the map. "Why'd you yell?", he asked. "I yelled because I found what I was looking for.", I told him. "Hmm. And what would that be?" "The next town.", I said. "You see, I'm looking for someone. Just an old friend." "Someone I might know?" "Not likely." We continued walking. We walked until we reached a town and it was starting to get dark. I yawned and Naruto and I decided to find a place to stay the night.